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I finished te game and i'm already attached to Pierrot. Another thing is i made it to the part where someone mentioned not having a choice. I like that because it shows the mc likes it there and that we really don't have one. It's a yandere game so i'm not at all surprised. It was a fantastic read! I can't wait for the next update! Truly one of the best i've ever read! My only issue is i went through it in one sitting, it was that good. 


might be a spoiler plus stuff that i know is a spoiler down below.


However, I don't trust the girl... if you went for Pierrot you'll know who i'm talking about. she gave me bad vibes. I could sense the jealousy from her right away. I also noticed at the beginning Pierrot was acting strange to me. He was always smiling, it confused me because we just met him and we were injured. His care didn't seem as genuine as he played it off to be. I will admit i love his character regardless. One of the best written yanderes i have ever come across. His character had me hooked from the start even with his off put sympathy and smile. I got two bad ends, but one automatically proved i was right about Pierrot. It's clear he does care, but it's like he's putting on an act to downplay the extent. Maybe i'm wrong, but i truly love how you wrote him. I especially love the others too, though i will admit i don't like the guy who adopted him... I don't like how he treated Pierrot, petition to protect Pierrot anyone?

The others were just as lovable as him making me get attached fast. I loved how caring they became especially with that fight and how mc cried. I like all the moments between each character. The writing had me hooked from the start. I haven't chosen every single choice there is, but from one i did choose lead me to finding more lore. I love how it's all set up though there is one thing i want to figure out... The unstable guy who screamed, i'm guessing by the title of the game he has Predators syndrome. I wonder if the teenager has it too and that's why he's there? There's just so much to unravel and figure out. Thank you for making this wonderful game<3 I can't wait for the next update to learn more!

Your words mean a lot to me!! Thank you, I'm so happy you liked the game and how you analyzed the character's <3!! Thanks for your support!

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That raven person is such a negative nancy, never has anything good to say. Wish we didnt have to see their sad lonely person comments. But this game looks great! Totally not playing it while at work! Dont fact check me... lmao

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Aaaaaand nothing I do can make the game work. At all.

I binned the old game, all of it, and re-downloaded the game...and it's STILL broken. >_>

How can I clear everything from my pc so the game works again? >_<

That is a BIG crash for refusing to enter a church. *sigh*

if you're on windows you can use win+r, type in: %appdata%/renpy

and then delete the predator's syndrome folder to erase all the data

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I''l try that. Thanks. ^_^

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Why do you not ask to be taken to the hospital immediately, and ask why he didn't do that?
(I'm sure he'd have a good excuse, but it's really weird and unnatural for the mc to not even question it. Anyone can buy a lab coat and pretend to be a doctor, and no town is without a clinic at the bare minimum.)

....kinda sad Tartaglia isn't a love interest.
I like him. ^_^

...after the fence deal, I REALLY like him! :heart:
(The bad ending I mean. lol)

I do not understand how the mc can feel remotely worried about people they just met and expect to leave behind in a few days...

But I suppose if the mc holed themselves up in a room alone and/or kept avoiding people and look for a way out like I would have done, then this wouldn't have been much of a story. lol

...pretty sure if I ever set foot in a church I'd go up in flames. >_>;
Best not to try.

I wish there was an option to NOT help with that part tho. Seriously.

The enter vs leave option is TOO difficult.
I've seen those before, and they're usually hard, but not impossible. It stops being a choice if it's impossible.

Fyi: When you DO manage to hit ANYTHING but Enter, then your game crashes. Might wanna fix that.
(It was a pain in the ass too. I'm a -BIT- pissed off at that so-called 'choice' atm. >_> )
I also broke the game and had to shut it down the hard way.

...and now the game is broken and won't even let me open it anymore. >_<

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Pop quiz: IS there a route that lets you leave?

well they do explain that they were going to take you to the infirmary but that it's being used by someone else. it's a small town!

seeing as tartaglia is a teenager and mc is an adult, that's not gonna happen

it's completely normal for to people to worry about someone they just met, even if they plan to leave. that's a pretty common feeling lol

also it's rather silly to wish to avoid a main section of the game, if the game's not for you that's fair, you're not gonna like everything. but how can there be story if you skip the main events

yes it stops being a choice if it's impossible, but that's the point. being unable to resist even if you try. i personally thought it was a cool mechanic that showcased that quite well.


you've left quite a few rude nitpicky comments on yandere vns the past couple days. having opinions about things is fine, but leaving pushy comments on indie devs trying to make art sucks 

i don't know if you're just young (and if so, remember these games are usually 18+) or if you're just not used to engaging with artists and game developers, but people simply do not have to take your input on their art and projects. lots of indie devs love feedback and criticism, but only if it's actually coming from someone who actually cares about the project. if your replies are all just "i don't like X, why didn't we do Y, please change Z" then maybe these games just aren't for you.

 

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This may be a culture difference... lol
I have NEVER seen a town small enough to not have at the bare minimum a medical center.

I duknow... what if the mc was 18 and Tartaglia 17?
Could work! ^_^

But I do get the point, all things considered.
Plus his obsession with his gf, so, yeah... *sigh*

Really? *raises an eyebrow* Humans are truly strange creatures...
Then again, I'm pretty sure I'm halfway to sociopathy, so I wouldn't know normal if it hit me in the face.

Depends on the game tho.
In Pact With a Witch there's the exact same type choice where they try and force your hand, but if you outmaneuver it, you get a whole different ending. (I think they had some plans to write a separate path there, but haven't gotten around to it, so they made it a summary end of the path instead.)

I can't know if the mouse forcing, when there is -clearly- a choice, means some force is trying to control your mind and you need to break out of it or not. It's very confusing, and I'm very stubborn --especially about avoiding churches.

It IS a pretty cool game mechanism, but certain overly stubborn readers will try to get out of it anyway I fear. lol

I have very strong opinions, and is not very good at wording my feedback nicely I fear.
The sad thing is that I sound a million times nicer than I used to. lol

And speaking as a writer myself I've gotten a lot of feedback, some of it sounding extremely harsh, far worse than me (especially on my older stories that wasn't as well-written as my newer ones), but I always found it helpful, because how can you improve as an artist if you don't know what you're doing wrong or could do better?

Yupp, totally forever 15. Always have been, always will be. ^_^
But my ID will still get me into any bar, so no worries. :p

The problem with my feedback I think, is that I tend to be very direct and honest when I talk.
And my attempts of joking probably don't sound as funny as it does to me.

It's a work in progress, but I'm working on it.

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Does this game have ANY good endings?
It doesn't say it does.

(Although I also don't know what counts as 'bad endings', so maybe one of those are good?)

And is the number of endings per person? Or in total? Because that's a big difference there.

(And it'd be kinda stupid if the only thing that impacted the ending was who you chose to date... That'd mean that there is no real choices in the game. Non that matters at the very least.)

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The game is a demo, it does not have any good endings because it isn't finished. When it's done it'll have more endings

It's in total. The only endings you can get in the current stage of development are on the choices and items you can find while exploring.

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i wouldn't take their comment too much to heart, if you click on their profile, they've left a lot of similarly rude comments on multiple games today.

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I didn't mean the part you can download.
I was reading about the endings that was listed, and non of them said there was a good ending.
Thus the question.

I suppose I should have specified "when it is finished".

OMG I LOVE THIS!!! Is there any walkthrough for the alt routes??

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Not yet, but, I'm planning to work on it!

There are some clues if you put:

Clue #1

Clue #2

Clue #3

Clue #4


When Pierrot asks for your name!

I've been following this game for a while and goodness, I'm honestly so jazzed. When people in servers I'm in ask for a game recommendation, I always make sure to mention this game. 

I absolutely love the characters, especially Pierrot, and how they're different from each other. I love seeing how they interact with each other, learning about them and their histories. 

It's clear how this game is a labor of love with all the thought put into it. I get so excited every time I see a post on the Tumblr. Thank you for making this game and I really look forward to seeing what you have planned for the future! 

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Thank you so much for all of your support! <3

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THIS GAME IS SOOO AMAZING!! I recommend it deeply. I love the way how every character is so different. I was only able to download the demo version :( I wanted to ask if theres a full game already (and if yes how do i download it bc im sorta new here)

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So glad to know you like it!

There's only the demo version for now!

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I love this game so so much! Pierrot is the best fr (edit: never mind I figured it out)

OH MY GOD AN UPDATE, I'LL BE TUNING IN

how to get the last photo of Pierrot because I thought I got it at the end, is it a secret one?

Hello! It seems the gallery is having an error, I'll be looking into it in my free time!

Wahh sorry i'm a little empty brained ^^;; How do you get alt route 2? I figured out how to get alt route 1 from looking through the comments -w-

Also alt route 3 if you can if that's ok

!! I think I figured out alt route 2 actually nvm yaaay

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For the Alt Route 3 you have to first finish the "Scaramouche" Route (Where you look into the trashcan) and also continue the game normally.


When you get the chance to explore after Tartaglia runs away, keep an eye open for a special hidden item!

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:(? I found the hidden item during Tartaglia's search but it's not leading to anything new, I got a new thing asking if I wanted to take the phone at the start of day 1 after finding the thing in the trashcan but I took it and it hasn't lead to anything. Tyvm for the help ^^;

Acabo de jugar la actualización y debo de decir que me encanto 10/10

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Me alegra mucho escuchar eso <3

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Wait, no, stop. I know the game said it had hella easter eggs, but the artist Guertena? Are we talking THE artist Guertena? The one from the rpg masterpiece that was Ib? Mah heart, mah soul…(ಥ◡ಥ)

All jokes aside, I was so shocked to see that. I haven’t heard anyone mention Ib in years

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YESSS It was a reference to Ib! I LOVED Ib growing up <3

Next update will have other references to other iconic RPG maker games!

<3

Termine de jugar la demo, me pareció preciosa la historia y los personajes. Espero que se actualice pronto 💗💗💗

is the full game out or is this a demo only?

Only the demo

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I think I must have spent 2 hours straight just trying out all the routes and Easter eggs in this game. And when I was done I felt compelled to immediately scroll through the entire tumblr looking for more Pierrot content. This game quickly established itself as one of my favorite yandere vns! The length, unique cast of characters, variety of choices, interesting setting and nice visuals make this a very satisfying demo to play and gives a lot to enjoy and chew on! Just from the demo, I'm already invested. I'd highly recommend playing this game if you enjoy yanderes and shady, mysterious circumstances! I hope you enjoy it, and Pierrot (best boy), as much as I do! :) 

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The first thing I need to talk about is the characters. It was extremely unfair how quickly Pierrot endeared himself to me. His cute hairstyle, reassuring smile and trustworthy "I'm on your side" personality (carefully maintained to hide the full extent of his attachment) are all big hits with me. I had already lost the battle from the first moment I saw him, he can do whatever he wants with my car. Another thing I like from him is what I'd describe as subtle clinginess- or a pushiness that doesn't seem pushy. He is always in your space but it seems like he's good-naturedly doing you a favor and hanging out with you because you need him. There's some subtleties to his behavior that I didn't notice the first time I played. I didn't notice how lukewarm his reactions were when I chose to bring up or hang out with other characters, and how he'd smile when I refused others' company. I really like small details like that which I could easily miss if I didn't play a second time!

Before this just becomes a Pierrot review I must mention the other main characters. They all have distinct and unique personalities, which I think is great, and all of them are likeable! I like Columbina second best and Arlecchino is also cool, but I would be down to hang out with everyone. It's also cool how they all have established relationships with one another, which is very realistic. Since I am a drama enjoyer, I can't wait to see them all wrassle later on in the name of love and jealousy. 

I really enjoy the setting! The fact that we're in an enclosed facility and have had our regular life upended introduces a forced reliance on other characters who may or may not be well-meaning, which causes a lot of interesting dynamics and tension. I like that the setting is different from your average town or city. Those are nice too! But places that are different with a different set of rules are extra exciting! I like the set up of the disease as well. I feel like it nicely explains why these yanderes are all grouped up together and why they will behave the way they do.

When it comes to choices, I felt like there were an appropriate amount of them! There were enough choices to make me feel involved and immersed in the story, and I liked replaying and choosing all the different ones to see what I could learn (I don't do that for every game). The fact that there are unlockable different routes even in the demo is pretty impressive!

I always like to mention length. Including all the routes and easter eggs, that's quite a lot of content! I did say I took a couple of hours to play through it all. I feel like this demo gave me a really good bite of the world and characters, and made me feel full and satisfied with the experience. Of course, I'm always eager to learn more, though. 

There's a lot of CGs in this demo. A lot! I really wasn't expecting so many. If I'm not mistaken, every character has at least one CG, and I believe most of them have more than one. This game is chock full of art, and I know that must have taken a lot of work, not to mention all the story writing and programming on the side. Even the side characters have sprites and interactions, that just screams high-effort to me. 

The last thing I have to say is that the creator deserves a lot of appreciation for their time and hard work on this game! Thank you for the experience! I'm desperately looking forward to more and I really want to see more Pierrot but I will be super patient and wait as long as it takes. Take care of yourself first!

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AAA You're too kind!! Thanks for giving a detailed review ;-; I love these types of commentary!!


I'm so happy you liked it, I will do my best to make more content that you and many others will continue to enjoy! <3 Thanks for giving this game a chance!

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No problem at all! I'm glad you're fine with my wordiness because I love to blab. 

I really enjoyed your game! Thank you so much for making it. I'm super looking forward to future updates and I'll definitely play them ASAP, but take your time! Rather than giving games like these a chance, I feel like I'm the lucky one because I have a chance to play them :')

I wish you good luck with the development of the game and all of your future endeavors! :D

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Will the full version be free?

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Yeah! I plan on the full game to be completely free.


When I was young, a bunch of games I liked were free and in a way, that was sort of magical to me haha.

While the game is exclusive for adults, it feels right to do it free, unless something changes my mind.


However, The extra stories and such will not be free, but this won't be the case for the main game.

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if you dont mind me asking, what will the extra stories include/entail?

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Well, to be fair, there are two categories for future games related to PS

Spin offs and Extra Content.

The spin offs will be free and will not be as complex as Predator's Syndrome and the Extra content, and will have stories about characters that don't appear or aren't a main focus in the game.

The Extra content, it's going to have stories related to the Love Interests. Such as how their lives are with the MC after the Good Ending and (Currently being developed) an NSFW Expansion that, like the name suggests, will have adult content of the main 5

Only the Extra Content won't be free. I don't know how much they will be, but, at least the NSFW Expansion will be above 10 USD because of how complex it is.


I hope I was able to clear up your doubts!

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Yes! thank you so much for taking time to answer :)

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great game!! i love the name easter eggs where you can learn a bit about their past.. kinda funny(creepy) when the game kicked me out when i tipped "Scaramouche" or the smile from Dottore idk maybe it way a bit creepy because i play it at night :,)and i also love the story it's interesting,i actually like everyone so far but my favs. are Pierrot and Tartaglia (even when he betrayed me and left me in that one route that brat:c)

i can't wait for more <3

This a really great game, I can’t wait to see what the story will bring in the future. Through I can’t help but wonder, when Pierrot ask my name, I got the response as saying my name means the noble one, I also tried out several other names, but none of them get the special response, so I am really curious why?

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Ahh! Yeah, haha, those are easter eggs, I put the name of some of my friend's OCs and made Pierrot say something different regarding that!

You and my friend's OCs share the same name and that's why it reacted like that.

I think eventually, I'll reveal those other easter eggs haha.

Man the world is actually so small. This easter egg really add up so much fun!

This was an amazing adventure!!! Although I had an idea what would happen, I was not prepared at all! I love all the easter eggs to the Italian play that I know very little about, it makes me want to learn more about it. This story is very interesting and I can see a lot of love and thought was put into it, I love Pierrot and am excited to learn about the other characters!!
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You're so sweet! 

Yeah, I totally encourage you to do research about it, it's amazing how many things you can learn and how the modern times still use it as a reference! 


Thank you so much for giving this game a chance!!

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TOBY

superrrr interesting omg!!! pierrot supremacy 

jst a quick question anyone know how 2 get Rosaura's 2nd CG?? I like collecting images of my favorite silly girl ^_^ (totally wasnt struggling for hours on it or something..)

So sorry for the late response!!


To get her second cg, after you have Sandrone's first event and after Pierrot says "I hope your day was enjoyable" You have to pick the option that talks about Rosaura.


Continue the game as normal until Pierrot asks you if you want to go back to the apartment with him, you have to say no and take a walk on your own.

There game should remember your answer and start a special event with Rosaura.

Ohh thank you!! Restarted and struggled a few times  to completion but im loving the story and art so far btw keep it up !! :3

I'm just starting to play it, but it's really wonderful! I loved absolutely everything and now I am completely in love with Pierrot..

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just started playing it !! love the genshin references lmaoo first i was like huh this has to be a coincidence but then i just found it funny <33

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Well...it's more of a reference to la Commedia Dell'arte if you're talking about the names haha, since the fatui and these characters both share the same name as characters from that Italian Commedy!


But PS doesn't have such a complex and worked lore as Genshin has LOL.


Maybe I will make references to Genshin, maybe! We'll see~!


Thanks for playing!

ahh makes sense!! sorry that i just assumed it was genshin only :( the games really cool and refreshing!! can’t wait for more <33

This was so much fun!! i love all the characters (especially arlecchino and pierrot) so much! i've found a couple of the easter eggs and i'm having a lot of fun trying to find more. can't wait to see what more comes of this game. good luck with future updates!!! <3

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Ohhhh, this is so so good! I love the game so much, though I think it would benefit lots by a more through proof-reading. Can't wait for the full release!

Ahh yeah, I think I know what you mean! English is not my first language, so sorry for any inconvienence! 

I'm totally open on hearing suggestions!


I'm very happy to know you liked the game!

Hmmm, if you'd like some help with that I can proof-read it for you! I'm quite proficient in writing, teee-heee

I feel a bit stupid but, can someone tell me how to get the Alternate Rute 1? I've been trying and I got every other picture, but I don't know what to do anymore...

Don't worry! It's not stupid at all!


To get Alternate Rute 1, When you have the chance to explore to your room, take it and check the kitchen very carefully, there's a hidden button

After you have done that, continue the game as normal until after the scene with Rosaura. There will be another option besides exploring the town.

Thank you soo much! I was so excited reading the story that I didn't even pause to think about that possibility... Now that I've played all of it I have to say this is absolutely one of my new favorites. You have my thanks and my devotion to your work.

Really liked the art and the characters, but I loved the take on what means to be a "yandere" here, I admit I played a lot of games with that kind of characters but you surprised me with the story and the documents that we can read to know more and all.

And yes, after playing the Alternate Routes 1 & 2 I still love him (honestly, he got me at breakfast, i'm pretty easy to please haha)


Take care and we'll be waiting patiently <3

Arlecquino será mi ruta 😦🧡

Gracias por el juego, espero que más gente lo conozca, se lo merece

I just played the alternate route and in LOVE with this game!!! i can't wait for the full release! <3

i love it! thank u for creating the game. i really like pierrot <3

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>3> will there be good ending this is really good :O

There will be good endings! I just have to code them when the game is done > <~!

So glad you enjoyed the demo!

awesome thanking for letting me know i am sucker for good endings on these games XD

THIS WAS SO FUN!!!! What an amazing demo!!!! I cant wait for the full story!